sábado, 14 de febrero de 2009

Road (Assingment #3)

At a first time Zion Land was a completely lone place where only the wind could live on. The entire world was so far away from Zion, that you could hear everything and at the same time nothing. No one was caring about what to do with Zion neither as a touristic place nor as a place to obtain resources. The only person who went to Zion to never ever make something was Roberto; He lived near to Zion and once upon a time he fall in love with Paola, and she lived crossing from Roberto´s House to Zion.

Roberto was so in love with her that next he ever meets her; he went every day to her house. At the time he was walking from his house to Paola´s house he always made the same road in Zion´s Field, but he never watch the field because he was always thinking in Paola´s face and stuff. At the time he had two years gong with Paola he decided to confide hi love to her and he said: "The next time I come to her house I´ll bring with me a marriage ring". At the next morning he took the grandmother´s ring and he put it in his hands. While he was walking to Paola´s House the ring fall off from his hands at the middle of Zion´s field, he turned around and watched that there were two road scars in the field, and after that he started crying. He remembered that his older brother was never at home at the same time he was at home and also that Paola´s hand had already a ring. He becomes so dad at the committed suicide in that place, after his dead the road to Zion was traveled by everyone and Paola never saw Roberto again.

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  2. It wouldn't be you if it didn't have a sad ending. You gave your character the same name I gave mine, but yours is Mexican :D

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  3. i dont understand D:
    i mean, he realized that she was married or something?
    or why he remembered that she has already a ring on his hands?

    but i liked it:)

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