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1) The career I want to study - Monica Tye
2) A special or unusual person - Arym Hernandez
3) A valuable discipline or practice - Yazmin Ramires
4) The best (or worst) teacher I ever had - Monica Espinosa
5) An important film (it can be also be a book, or a TV show) - Erick Guzman
6) A music video (select a group, or a music solist) - Diana Perlette Romo
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ResponderEliminar7:30
the alchemist is the way a person can be reflected in the world; more than a book this is the epic begining of my hole new life.
the book is writed by my favorite writter, Paulo cohelo, who focuses on the "Why" of everything.
The main theme pf the whole book is the existance of a personal legend inside every single thing that is on earth; cohelo explains how does even just a little rock has a lot of special and importance in the life of many people.
I think I can devide the book in two main parts, the story of the guy is being descrived and that he want to be someone or to have some importance in his life. Then after explaining the life of the boy, the story begins with a dream that should be takken on.
Then the other part of the text or book is the part that talks about any single person that reads the book, the way everyone exist, bevause you think alot in the coming of the end of the story. while he is explaining the story of a spanish boy you become the same spanish boy and you start thinking and analyzing how similar is your life in comparision of him.
Also in the book you wanted learn all the stuff you dont know about nature and the interaction of humans, but if you can get the leasson of the Alchemist, belive me that inmediatly you start doing the nesesary to get the lenguage of the universe.
I recomen this book to all the lovers of the Paulo Cohelo series, but also to every single person that loves to think in what´s next in our lifes; as a warning I can say to you to read The Diary of a Wizar before you start with the alchemist.
7:45
Topic Sentence:
I think I can devide the book in two main parts, the story of the guy is being descrived and that he want to be someone or to have some importance in his life.
Concluding Sentence:
I recomend this book to all the lovers of the Paulo Cohelo series, but also to every single person that loves to think in what´s next in our lifes
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ResponderEliminarThe worst/best teacher I have ever had.
ResponderEliminarBrainstorming:
teacher, fith grade, lucas, tyler, maleek, mean, evil, nice, therapy dogs, Mrs. Jones, strict, frieday club, study club, math, honking laugh, severe eyes, short hair, calm voice.
Monica Espinoza=)♣
swimming
ResponderEliminarbrainstorming:
a sport
discpline
rules
habit
special diet
relax
strong
heatlh
competitions
swimmsuit
equipment
fun
responsability
individuality
Swimming, is the most popular aquatic sport, it is very old, but you can be a strong and healthy person if you practice it and adquire some discpline skills by the habits and. special diet you follow
music videos(choose one performer or group, one type of music, or one TV show):
ResponderEliminarhappy punk,
fun,
blink182,
rock show,
waste of money,
friendship, nothing to do,
good times,
brainstorming
ResponderEliminarA special or unsual someone
Javi
Tato
death
life
fun
frienship
best friends
overdose
suicide
unusual
in memory
happiness
sadness
anger
the best time of my life
Topic sentence:
My two very best friends and our time together
Thesis:
Even people who are with you for a short time can change your life forever.
Monica E: I already read yours and I think you took a good direction, it tends to happen you know, that small jump form love to hate (:
ResponderEliminarYazz: You should mention the therapeutical properties of swiming not many people know them ;D
The career I want to study
ResponderEliminarBRAINSTORMING:
Career, nutrition, nutritionist, acupuncture, science, medicine, practice, good grades, job, money, planned future, hard work, secure job, private practice, needles, helping people, well-eating habits, exercise, food, arthritis, anxiety, headaches, tics, muscle spasms, importance of healthy eating, alternative medicine, anorexia, traditional Chinese medicine, bulimia, heart diseases, cholesterol problems, obesity, diabetes, migraine, sprains, contusions, China, etc.
Goals: practice, good grades, job, money, private practice, planned future, helping people
Nutrition: nutritionist, career, science, medicine, secure job, hard work, well-eating habits, exercise, food, importance of healthy eating, anorexia, bulimia, heart diseases, cholesterol problems, obesity, diabetes.
Acupuncture: needles, alternative medicine, China, traditional Chinese medicine, arthritis, anxiety, headaches, tics, muscle spasms, migraine, sprains, contusions.
THESIS STATEMENT: According to my goals for the future, which are getting good grades, having a stable job, and earning money, I decided nutrition is the right career for me and also studying a little bit of acupuncture.
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ResponderEliminaro that's true
ResponderEliminartherapeutical properties too :B
thesis statement:
Swimming, is the most popular aquatic sport, it is very old, but you can be a strong and healthy person if you practice it and adquire some discpline skills by the habits and. special diet you follow
topic sentence: all about swimming
i like your topic arym, even though it's sad what happened, but it's happy too, because you can remember all the good things:)
ResponderEliminarPer, i know you would write about blink... but i think you could say more things about them :)
ResponderEliminarmonica: I’m really looking forward to reading your essay. I’m guessing it will be very interesting because of what you’ve told me about that grade. You should include some of your very comical stories in the essay.
ResponderEliminarYazmin: I think you should include in your topic the different styles there are in swimming, such as freestyle, etc :)
arym... I really love the tessis u make it is kind of truth, and also the brain storm is really complete.
ResponderEliminarmonica e... I think u made more a description than a fall of ideas but wathever, it will help you.